Reborn City by Rami Ungar (Book Review)

reborncityZahara Bakur is a Muslim teenager recently moved into the gambling town of Reborn City. After her parents are killed by gang violence, Zahara is forced to join the Hydras, an interracial gang whose leaders have supernatural abilities. As the violence in Reborn City escalates and Zahara becomes closer to the Hydras, including the quiet but stern Rip, she finds herself drawn into a dark conspiracy involving the origins of the leaders and the shadowy corporation that rules over Reborn City.

So, I should probably start at the beginning. Rami Ungar is a friend and fellow blogger, who I met through our shared love for Doctor Who! He is a self-published author and more than once the topic of me checking out his work has come up. I always felt like he was more at home in the horror genre, which everyone knows isn’t my thing at all, but he suggested I check out Reborn City, since it should be more up my alley. Now here we are! Reviewing the work of friends is never easy for me, but I am going to try my best to put my thoughts in coherent sentences!

What I Liked

  • Reborn City puts an emphasis on people being prejudiced towards certain races or religions. It is really blunt at talking about all kinds of racism, while offering the reader a diverse cast of characters and I can definitely appreciate that! Also, it’s a topic that seems very current to me. With the refugee crisis still going on, it’s in fact a global topic, seen as people freak out and get ridiculously paranoid and xenophobic lately.
  • The backstory of the characters was really intriguing and very satisfying once you found out how everything ties together! I think without the Epilogue, there would have been a couple of unanswered questions, but all in all Reborn City could be a standalone. However, now it is open to a sequel and does kind of make you wonder what the gang will be up to next.
  • Even though I have to admit that it took me a while, I really liked the characters in the end. I think the backflashes helped most with that because often you only got glimpses of emotions which made it difficult to bond for me.
  • I loved all the superpowers!! Some of them I recognised from other superheroes and others were completely unique. It was great to find out about them and to see how differently they could be used.

What I Didn’t Like

  • I don’t know if that was because I am not a native English speaker or not, but I did not handle the gangster lingo well. I would have much rather preferred “normal” English with a couple of slang words thrown in, than them having sort of their own language – even if it does completely make sense in that particular setting!
  • It bothered me a little how naive Zahara was about joining a gang and then how lenient they were with her. Also, I would have really liked to know more about her first two weeks with Hydra since she really seemed to take to some of the members, but I couldn’t quite get where that connection was coming from. As I’ve mentioned above, bonding was sometimes a little difficult for me, but I think it would have been easier if I had read about some actual bonding (this excludes Ilse and Zahara – I get their friendship!).
  • I am not a big fan of violence. I get why it was there and why it was necessary, but it already started out really intense and I think that those sort of stories just aren’t the most enjoyable for me to read.

Lastly, I am sorry but I have to mention one more thing. I am a cover snob! I will admit to that freely and while I can guarantee you that Rami has many talents, I think the cover needs a lot of work. But since I don’t want to be a hypocrite, here’s my suggestion for how it might look better (please take into account that I am no tech-wiz either and that I am well aware that it could need some cleaning up):

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Fazit: 3/5 stars! Reborn City wasn’t a bad story at all and quite the page turner in the end, but I think that other people can appreciate it more than I did!

Do you think you would enjoy Reborn City? What’s your take on my cover suggestion? Share your thoughts below!

15 thoughts on “Reborn City by Rami Ungar (Book Review)

  1. I wish I had known you when this book came out. I would’v used your cover for sure! And I’m glad you liked the book so much. I’ll let you know when the sequel comes out (though at this point that’s contingent on when I get a new job). You’re right about the language too: a lot of people found problems with that, though it was a lot more difficult to get through in the first edition. Once again, thanks for reaing RC, Katja. I really appreciate it. I’ll try to return the favor someday.

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  2. Reblogged this on Rami Ungar The Writer and commented:
    My good friend, fellow blogger and huge fan of just about everything, as well as budding YA novelist, Katja Kadrnoska (aka Kat Impossible), was kind enough to read my science fiction novel “Reborn City” and give it a review. Turns out, she liked it, which made me happy.
    And she made a really excellent cover, which is better than the one I made (I didn’t know any graphic designers at the time, so that’s what I got). I might have to steal it for a new edition or something.
    Anyway, thanks for reading RC, Katja. I appreciate it, and I hope we get to talk about books and movies and shows for years to come! Oh, and that you read the sequel to RC once it comes out. I would very much appreciate that.

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  3. I am a firm believer that the cover should be honestly indicative of what lies within. The tattooed fist conveys a gang related story. The city view conveys an urban setting. I did not understand the significance of the ‘Hydra’ symbol, until it was mentioned in the comments. Perhaps a tattooed fist rising up behind the city? Also, as there is a superpower/supernatural element, that needs to be addressed in the cover image. Maybe a lightning flash or storm clouds would help? Good job, both of you, but I think the final cover is still out there.

    Good Luck!
    Merry Christmas, Kat & Rami!
    Your pal,
    ~Icky. 🙂

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    • Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment, Icky! I know that both our covers need work, but I am also of the opinion that the cover doesn’t have to portray it all! There are some really simplistic and stunning ones out there, that tell absolutely nothing of the story. However, your comment gave me the idea that we maybe should put like a neon-green glow around the city, because of why the Hydras have their superpowers.
      Merry Christmas to you too!

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